Jill Haper 42nd Street New York. Phone: 1-212-000-0000 OBJECTIVE: To bring to your organization enthusiasm, dedication, responsibility, and good work ethic,combined with a desire to utilize my skills obtained through experience in the following areas: EDUCATION: 1979-1984 Epiphany Elementary School 1984-1989 Regis School Graduated with a 3.0 G.P.A. Member of basketball team, volleyball team, & school choir. EXPERIENCE: 2001-2004 Mole Paul Barber Shop Receptionist 1997-2001 Fancy Dry Cleaners & Tailor's Salesperson 1993-1997 Emack & Bolio's Ice Cream Parlour Cashier 1992-1993 Nicholena's Bed & Breakfast Front Desk Clerk Jill Megan 42nd Street Home Phone: 1-212-000-0000 Harper New York, New York OBJECTIVE: To bring to your organization enthusiasm, dedication, responsibility, and good work ethic, combined with a desire to utilize my skills obtained through experience in the following areas: EDUCATION: 1979-1984 Epiphany Elementary School 1984-1989 Regis School Graduated with a 3.0 G.P.A. Member of basketball team, volleyball team, & school choir. EXPERIENCE: 2001-2004 Mole Paul Barber Shop Receptionist 1997-2001 Fancy Dry Cleaners & Tailor's Salesperson 1993-1997 Emack & Bolio's Ice Cream Parlour Cashier 1992-1993 Nicholena's Bed & Breakfast Front Desk Clerk

Jill Harper 42nd Street New York, New York Phone: 1-212-000-0000 OBJECTIVE: To bring to your organization enthusiasm, dedication, responsibility, and good work ethic,combined with a desire to utilize my skills obtained through experience in the following areas: EDUCATION: 1979-1984 Epiphany Elementary School 1984-1989 Regis School Graduated with a 3.0 G.P.A. Member of basketball team, volleyball team, & school choir. EXPERIENCE: 2001-2004 Mole Paul Barber Shop Receptionist 1997-2001 Fancy Dry Cleaners & Tailor's Salesperson 1993-1997 Emack & Bolio's Ice Cream Parlour Cashier 1992-1993 Nicholena's Bed & Breakfast Front Desk Clerk

Your resume should be in descending chronological order. Your educational section does not follow that formatting. Also, you should describe some of your responsibilities at each job. Did you answer phones? Did you interact with the public? In person or via the phone? Did you have to file reports? Handle money? Did you supervise anyone? Etc. BTW, I hope that's not your real name or address.