What do you think of this poem i wrote."There is this ladie, her body is flawless, her beautiful,long,silky hair floats in the breeze, her eyes give me butterflies, her beautiful smile makes me want to kiss her, she is the most Gorgeous ladie ever.
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Nickr893
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I think you should date/marry her, but don't give up the day job! Is this supposed to rhyme?
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Re-worked a bit. U can still change it. My lady, body flawless. Hair so beautiful,long, and silky, it floats as the breeze, eyes like butterflies, a smile to kiss like brandy wine, most Gorgeous lady ever. Here is my version. My lady so fair, long of hair, floats like silk, in a breeze of milk. Eyes like butterflies, smile like brandy wine, each look, makes butterflies, in this stomach of mine.
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Lady with the look, and body mistook, hair real good, eyes with mood, she kisses real good, gorgeous, not rude. Just kidding, see my other answer.
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