What's the best way to start a story about a girl getting brain surgery- fictional?
by 
Dark_Faerie
ANSWERS: 7
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you have the power to decide... its your story right?
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'Doctor! The intern just destroyed her motor abilities!' The OR doors swing open, and a handsome, rugged man enters the room. A nurse faints, crashing to the floor taking with her the tray or surgical instruments. 'Never fear! Chuck Norris is here!' Shouts the doctor who's suddenly surrounded by a strong smelling yellow puddle. With a quick karate chop to the throat from Chuck, the tumor pops out of the patients head. The woman regains conciousness as Chuck sweeps her off the opperating table and flies out of the hospital to his home on Jupiter.
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Start with the patient coming to after surgery. "Bright light.. headache..Mom, I don't want to go to school....ZZZZZ...Head really hurts.5 more minutes mom...ZZZ Whats all the noise, and now my arm hurts.." The girl slowly figures out she is to old to be in school, Her mother isn't there and she is waking up from surgery in the hospital.
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Well, one way is this girl is walking down the street trying to look cool and she gets thrown against a wall by some dude on a rickety skateboard. Her head hits the wall with such force the top of her head pops off and her brain falls out and lands (with a sickening splash) in the river. A passing good Samaritan (the story is set in the middle east, did I say that) dives into the river, retrieves the brain and gives it to the dude on the skateboard to run down to the hospital to be surgically restored then reinserted in the girl's cranial vault when her skull is being reconstructed using empty egg cartons and a heavy-duty stapler (plus various surgical tools and devices and a lot of high-flown medical jargon of course). Anyway, when the girl comes around after the surgery it becomes immediately apparent something has gone terribly wrong, because . . . (over to you Dark_Faerie)
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Here's one for ya. Start with almost like a dream... The girl can feel herself floating down a river, but something is squeaking... shut it up, she thinks. The river stops, and she swirls around in a whirlpool. A sharp bolt of pain drives away the water for a moment, and she thinks she sees a man above her... "she's coming back, where's the..." and the water splashes over her face, dragging back back under. But the water smells sweet, and she isn't drowning. She's just... slipping away.... The water begins to part, she has no idea how long she's been dead. But she wasn't ever dead. And she can feel warm dry sheets around her. She was never in the water. And her head feels raw, burning lights above her. As she focuses through the burning light, she can see a hospital room around her, and begins to feel the bandages wrapped around her head..... What happened? she wonders to herself... And so begins a long fervent story of re-discovery of what went wrong.
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she is in a room and cant see... Ah the doctors dont know she is alive and the pain puchs her like a pinch. and they wake but nothing happenes. They here her breath boom it hurt nothing is going know she is dead and but you cant tell. AHHHHH that scream is hurt. damn you hear and gone
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Describe the puddle of shaven hair on the prep room floor. (you know, head shaved, surgery prep....) Your welcome, I'm a genius.
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