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I only read Chapter One, short on time, sorry. But things that struck me were that it had a strong introduction that made me want to read more. I found the Random Capitalisation of some words distracting (eg The Jungle Floor), and did they have LED torches in the 1930s? Of course these are just technical pedantries that don't really interfere with what seems to be a cracking good yarn; I'll be reading more!
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