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by Mushen on August 16th, 2007
Jeffers:
As you are criticising grammar, I will too.
1. Your primary comment is incorrect. Replace the word 'something' with
'Something'. Remember, sentences always begin using a capital letter.
2. There should be a comma after the word 'teacher'. Try saying your
sentence out aloud, without the comma, it does not sound correct. Use a
comma where the natural pause (when reading aloud) occurs.
3. In reference to your second comment: replace the word 'and' with 'And'.
The previous comment has an exclamation mark at the end. The dot
used when writing the exclaimation mark represents a period marking the
end of the sentence.
3a. Remove the comma after the word 'and' at the start of the sentence.
And is a conjunctive or joining word and in this case, cancels out the
comma you have used.
3b. The word 'kinda' is not a real word - you have used incorrect
terminology. Replace 'kinda' with 'kind of'.
3c. Following the word 'Grammar' you have 3 periods consequtively. A
sentence cannot end three times in a row. Replace the periods with a
hyphen or semi-colon.
On a final note, your use of language is not particularly good. The words 'look at your English Grammar' sound as if you are referring to an independent object. It would be better to change your sentence to read, 'you should review your understanding of English Grammar and it's application to the written word'.
Anonymous: I do believe, you and I have won this argument without a doubt.
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