Can some one help me finish this haiku poem
Silence surrounds me,
As the rain pours down my face,
Need another line!!!!
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HiddenBeHideAMask
ANSWERS: 6
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a twelve point buck enters my crosshairs. +5
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I was disemboweled!!
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Do you need the line to rhyme?
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Drops of lonely tears --- No one sees me cry --- [NOTE: Rain is not silent.] Only rain is heard --- Gonna need a towel [may not be allowed. "Towel" COULD be one or two syllables in pronunciation] --- Water fills my ears --- Weatherman said sun! --- Washing pain away --- Will any of those work for ya?
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Worries drain away. or Washing pain away. from BigDaddy I like this one better, I think it has better imagery
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The world has no sound. Or: My mind hears no sound.
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