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By Anonymous Asked Aug 14 2009 7:24AM
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Answer 1 out of 5

by Anonymous on Aug 14, 2009 at 9:21 am Permalink

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this peom is about what ever u feel when u are in a win or lose situation and the disction we have to make
people might be confused about the poem but who isnt confused when ur in love
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by Anonymous on Aug 14, 2009 at 9:18 am Permalink

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cheer for the comments
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Answer 3 out of 5

by SomewhereSomething on Aug 14, 2009 at 7:34 am Permalink

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I like this, it's original, different, fresh, and I love the structure and the contrasts that you use e.g. "the courage the cowardness", "the sun rain cold", "the power the lazyness". It has excellent rhythm to it as well. Just use spell check and it is quite a lovely poem!
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Answer 4 out of 5

by Sunny_Gal on Aug 14, 2009 at 7:32 am Permalink

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It great to put what is in your heart on paper. It became alive. I little confuss. Are you a poet who is love. Are do you feedback on your work. Are you hopeful with love or lose.
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Answer 5 out of 5

by Anonymous on Aug 14, 2009 at 7:24 am Permalink

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the sun the rain the cold
do i leave it and get beattan and deviced
the happiness the bitterness and the loneyness
or do i carry on and have what i need
the courage the cowardness
i could not long for something so much
the guilt the wisdom and the lies
but it hurts when i think of what i have got
the dream the realization
which it is fair to say i have only few
the self generated Spontaneous the time
but if i haven't got you i want so much
the power the lazyness
like things that dont matter
and if i have you thats it all i want
love you be with you leave you
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