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the sun the rain the cold do i leave it and get beattan and deviced the happiness the bitterness and the loneyness or do i carry on and have what i need the courage the cowardness i could not long for something so much the guilt the wisdom and the lies but it hurts when i think of what i have got the dream the realization which it is fair to say i have only few the self generated Spontaneous the time but if i haven't got you i want so much the power the lazyness like things that dont matter and if i have you thats it all i want love you be with you leave you
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It great to put what is in your heart on paper. It became alive. I little confuss. Are you a poet who is love. Are do you feedback on your work. Are you hopeful with love or lose.
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I like this, it's original, different, fresh, and I love the structure and the contrasts that you use e.g. "the courage the cowardness", "the sun rain cold", "the power the lazyness". It has excellent rhythm to it as well. Just use spell check and it is quite a lovely poem!
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cheer for the comments
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this peom is about what ever u feel when u are in a win or lose situation and the disction we have to make people might be confused about the poem but who isnt confused when ur in love
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