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ANSWERS: 6
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i cant say yes without listening to it first.
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Dont know. Where is your poem ?
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I feel that while it's composition and technical acuity is spot-on, I wonder if you may be 'holding back' emotionally? ;-)
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what do i do now looking back i seem somwhow i'm holding on to something that iam never going to get do i give up , carry on or wish its hurting but i can see the happiness i think does it even matter or does it mean alot that i'm so far from where i want to be and a short way for where iam not i cant decied what to do now but this is life
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No.
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I don't like how the last line doesn't rhyme with anything else because the rest of the poem rhymes. Get rid of it or change it. Other than that, it was okay.
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