What do you think of my poem on a scale of 1-10? (Inside..)
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Grieving and wailing, screaming of loss The woman cried dearly for the one she loved That day her love told her, he had become cross Unceremoniously out of his life she was shoved He no longer loved her, and now she was dross Though she still thought of him as her beloved She did all for him, but was still tossed aside All alone she was now, part of her died But out of these horrid times, pluses were shown Someone new came from the sidelines to give Give her things that were new and unknown This new person survived a brutal sieve For once she was loved and it was quite known Her old live was now unable to be relived Out of ashes the beautiful phoenix rose Better and better it’s body grows
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That's very good, I'll give it an 8 :)
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