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by youngeniusjake on October 9th, 2009
In the land of the hopeless-Jake Seamons
The streets are bare,
but the toxic rivers flow,
you have to prepare,
for the wicked unknown,
the people aren't nice,
their morals are torn,
they're cursed with life,
from the second they're born,
they live with a sickness,
that hides in the heart,
in the land of the hopeless,
you end when you start,
by Jonathan on October 10th, 2009
Great Poem Jake. keep up the 'creative genius' and let's see some more! +5 have a good one Man. Best, Jonathan
by ♥AngelHeart♥ on October 9th, 2009
Honestly? It is very negative and I am a very positive person. I'm sorry but I do not like it. I'm not being mean, just being honest.
by Grant aka Guybrush Threepwood on October 9th, 2009
nope. sorry, i don't.
by Sociopathetic on October 9th, 2009
It makes sense, and reads nicely.
by Anonymous on October 9th, 2009
I like it, it's very nice Jake :)
+5
by InfoJunkie on October 9th, 2009
I like it alot... the last 2 lines really have a strong inpact... show us more poems!
by Jacques on October 9th, 2009
I like it Jake, well done.
+3
by Spicy Hot on October 9th, 2009
I think it is stunningly good, well done.
by Ion on October 9th, 2009
Nice Job Man.
by -Icy- on October 9th, 2009
love it ! +5
by Dr.help on November 9th, 2009
yes it was nice =) so i hear you box right? i like Muey Thia kickboxing but i wanna learn boxing but i cant find anyone to teach meh lol
by Sharona Life is a Tale Told by an Idiot on November 9th, 2009
Okay I guess.
by Nightrider on November 7th, 2009
Nice!
by Universe Of Life on November 7th, 2009
Yes I do, nicely done Jake ... Expression of one's inner self from understanding and interpretation of their own life moments ... is indeed a great art, keep it up my friend.
Peace
by bye friends health problems on October 16th, 2009
Yes I liked it very much. Kinda sad but very touching as well. You have talent and are very creative! Stick with it.
by Sweet Like Sugar on October 17th, 2009
Yupp! i do
by Rawwr on October 13th, 2009
You got some skills there.
Your very creative.. i love it :)
by -Slick- on October 13th, 2009
Very nice poem Jake, thanks for sharing. +5
by Cheery Cherry on October 10th, 2009
Very nice, Jake. I really like:
"they live with a sickness,
that hides in the heart,
in the land of the hopeless,
you end when you start, "
:)
by youngeniusjake on October 13th, 2009
thanks all!
by SoulSearcher on October 17th, 2009
Pretty good.
by shy shy on October 23rd, 2009
LOVEE IT!..almost as much as i love you!...jk
by Marky Mark on November 7th, 2009
Great poem. A bleak but apt reflection of the peculiar problems we are experiencing in the world today. Well done.
by Anonymous on November 7th, 2009
Yeah, I really like it : )
by LarryH54 on November 7th, 2009
Kinda reminds me of one of my early efforts. That was kinda thin, too. That's okay, just remember the imagery has to match the emotion. They say to make good poetry, all you have to do is open a vein and write. I don't see blood here.
by shy shy on November 3rd, 2009
your a bigg dork :p
by strange1 still in pb on October 23rd, 2009
you got potential
by Fiddle Playing Creole Bastard on October 9th, 2009
Which poem?
What is a credo poem?
by Answerbag Staff on May 18th, 2010
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Finish: roses are red, viloets are____________?
by DIYman on December 8th, 2011
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is this a good poem?
by Dylan_L2271 on November 16th, 2011
| 2 people like this
Can I see/hear some of your own personally written poetry?
by Unicorn Man on October 31st, 2011
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Does anyone else write poetry when they are hurting? It is an outlet for me...
by Nancy is really struggling right now... on November 21st, 2011
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by Spicy Hot on October 9th, 2009
Rather sad. +5
by Anonymous on October 12th, 2009
i have a new one posted
by youngeniusjake on October 16th, 2009
Pretty well done. Not bad.
by Pumpkin Etoile on November 7th, 2009
Nicely done ... 'morals are torn' ... Indeed!
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Peace
by Universe Of Life on November 7th, 2009