by Pirastic on September 2nd, 2009

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Is this a good line for a poem, or is it just stupid?
"I am my future."

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  • by Teresa on September 2nd, 2009

    Teresa

    It doesn't stand alone very well, so it's hard to say how it would be in a poem. It needs context, and depending on that context, it could be good or stupid.

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  • by ficwriterpaul on September 2nd, 2009

    ficwriterpaul

    Kinda cliche but you could build on it.

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  • by Jessica on September 2nd, 2009

    Jessica

    I Like it :)

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  • by Redrum on September 2nd, 2009

    Redrum

    depends on what the poem about

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  • by Gossamer on September 2nd, 2009

    Gossamer

    really depends on the lines that preceed and follow really

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  • by Pablo on September 2nd, 2009

    Pablo

    or ~my future is mine

    nothing is stupid to a poet

    sometimes you have to use political license

    like in Shakespear

    A rose by any other name would still smell as sweet

    horshit by any other name would still smell like hosreshit

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  • by Sunshine in a COAT of Sunshine on September 2nd, 2009

    Sunshine in a COAT of Sunshine

    No its nice. Go with it and maybe post it afterwards.:)

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  • by gtravels loves her life penguin on September 2nd, 2009

    gtravels loves her life penguin

    Sounds good. They even named an organization after it.
    http://www.iammyfuture.org/

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  • by Anonymous T on September 2nd, 2009

    Anonymous T

    In all art, whether something
    is a masterpiece or a piece
    of crap is decided by people.
    .
    To me it sounds like a truism
    without much insight into
    anything. But don't ask me,
    cause I'm not into poetry.

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  • by CousinVinny on September 2nd, 2009

    CousinVinny

    That works.

    Sounds interesting to me.

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  • by Self Consuming Cannibal on September 2nd, 2009

    Self Consuming Cannibal

    Poetry isn't about public opinion, it's about expressing yourself. You can't really judge a poem by one line either. But I think that's a good line, it's true and real. =)

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  • by Millenium - The Mysterious M. . . GONE! on September 2nd, 2009

    Millenium - The Mysterious M. . . GONE!

    I find it rather. . . .poignant. . . . .myself!

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