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It doesn't stand alone very well, so it's hard to say how it would be in a poem. It needs context, and depending on that context, it could be good or stupid.

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Answer 2 out of 12

Kinda cliche but you could build on it.

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Answer 3 out of 12

I Like it :)

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Answer 4 out of 12

depends on what the poem about

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Answer 5 out of 12

really depends on the lines that preceed and follow really

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Answer 6 out of 12

or ~my future is mine nothing is stupid to a poet sometimes you have to use political license like in Shakespear A rose by any other name would still smell as sweet horshit by any other name would still smell like hosreshit

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Answer 7 out of 12

Sounds good. They even named an organization after it. http://www.iammyfuture.org/

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Answer 8 out of 12

No its nice. Go with it and maybe post it afterwards.:)

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Answer 9 out of 12

Poetry isn't about public opinion, it's about expressing yourself. You can't really judge a poem by one line either. But I think that's a good line, it's true and real. =)

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Answer 10 out of 12

That works. Sounds interesting to me.

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