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by Teresa on September 2nd, 2009
It doesn't stand alone very well, so it's hard to say how it would be in a poem. It needs context, and depending on that context, it could be good or stupid.
by ficwriterpaul on September 2nd, 2009
Kinda cliche but you could build on it.
by Jessica on September 2nd, 2009
I Like it :)
by Redrum on September 2nd, 2009
depends on what the poem about
by Gossamer on September 2nd, 2009
really depends on the lines that preceed and follow really
by Pablo on September 2nd, 2009
or ~my future is mine
nothing is stupid to a poet
sometimes you have to use political license
like in Shakespear
A rose by any other name would still smell as sweet
horshit by any other name would still smell like hosreshit
by Sunshine in a COAT of Sunshine on September 2nd, 2009
No its nice. Go with it and maybe post it afterwards.:)
by gtravels loves her life penguin on September 2nd, 2009
Sounds good. They even named an organization after it.
http://www.iammyfuture.org/
by Anonymous T on September 2nd, 2009
In all art, whether something
is a masterpiece or a piece
of crap is decided by people.
.
To me it sounds like a truism
without much insight into
anything. But don't ask me,
cause I'm not into poetry.
by CousinVinny on September 2nd, 2009
That works.
Sounds interesting to me.
by Self Consuming Cannibal on September 2nd, 2009
Poetry isn't about public opinion, it's about expressing yourself. You can't really judge a poem by one line either. But I think that's a good line, it's true and real. =)
by Millenium - The Mysterious M. . . GONE! on September 2nd, 2009
I find it rather. . . .poignant. . . . .myself!
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It was intended to be a poem about myself, each sentence begining with the phrase "I am". I was going to use it as the ending line, but I think I'm going to change it to "I am waiting and ready to take on my future" instead.
by Pirastic on September 2nd, 2009