The girl laid near the river. Simply. She did and there was nothing to it. The trees, the leaves and the diamond waters crushing over themselves to get to an end that didn’t exist, to the ultimate pleasure of the waters. Her chin rested upon her hands, her elbows, the ground. Salmon swam across her vision while she smiled at the peculiar way they conducted their lives. Her name coincidently an ode to a budding affection for the Earth, Cybele. Cybele heard a buzz, a strange buzz from above her head. Her astonishingly calm toned blonde hair fell over the grass as she adjusted to look upward by turning over and resting her weight on her elbows. A brilliant ray of sunlight cast through the tree tops that made her squint. She could barely make out the silhouettes of a pair of dragonflies remained in place directly above her eyes for a short moment, and then left.

personally i hate reading. but it sounds pretty interesting and looks like it was written by a real writer

Not at this point in time. It's pretty choppy, I'm afraid. You need to bone up on your Grammar! Laid, Lay..double check this word! "Simply. She did and there was nothing to it." This sentence has nothing to it...it's not exactly doing much to move the story forward...Trying to call "Simply." a "sentence" is not working at all, it makes it choppy. Where is your punctuation? "Her name coincidently an ode to a budding affection for the Earth, Cybele." Her name, coincidently, was an ode to a budding affection for the earth, Cybele. "Her astonishingly calm toned blonde hair......" I'm sorry, but this is a lot of drivel! HAIR might be astonishingly coiffed, into some elaborate design. It might even be an astonishing color of bright red, or deep black against pale skin...but HAIR has no emotional attributes...it may appear flat, dull, or blow about wildly in the wind...it can hang lank, or be wavy...however it has no human emotion, unless you have hair constructed of a bunch of tiny snakes, in which case THE SNAKES might act and react to stimulus they are presented with.... Needless to say...hair is not Calm Toned..AT ANY POINT IN REASONABLE TIME.... The Character in and of herself...DOES prick my interests and I think it could be reasonable that I could be seduced into wanting to know more about her. But you are going to have to focus a good bit on your writing and sentence structure...the basics. DO NOT ALLOW THIS TO INTERFERE WITH WRITING THE STORY! You can always improve the foundational knowledge you need and "clean it up" after you have written it! That is what EDITING is all about...clean up! Just make sure you do that, before you attempt to send it off anywhere! Clean and tighten this up...and I think you may be on to something good here!