by TheWorldBelongs2ME on March 8th, 2009

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I am missing one syllable in this haiku I made in the last line:
Raindrops trickle down
Gloom fills the dark, midnight air
As the Earth weeps

Any suggestions on a one syllable word for the last line?

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  • - Night

    Change the last line to "The Earth, mournful, weeps"

    weeps, waits

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