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by Capt.Lizzie_pirate king_Swann on November 10th, 2008

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Here's my newest poem as of today, for those of you asking for more or continuation of previous work. What do you think of this one? (See my answer)

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  • by Capt.Lizzie_pirate king_Swann on November 10th, 2008

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    Whimsical sense
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    Falling out of bed,

    I landed on my head.

    When the moon was high,

    I looked up in the sky,

    and I wished that I could fly.

    In the time it took to turn around,

    I saw that you weren't there,

    you were nowhere to be found,

    in my world where all was purple,

    and I was brown.

    They said that time could fix it soon,

    I thought you had hung the moon,

    but when reality crashed all around,

    I still looked for you,

    to take my hand,

    and walk with me into,

    the mercurial land,

    lead me,

    hold me,

    care and share,

    do what you will,

    I'd follow you,

    until the moon,

    was really like the birds in summer,

    and the sky was filled with pudding,

    while cookies crash all around.

    Take me there,

    where there are no worries,

    so we can play all day,

    and love all night,

    time stands still,

    and there are no trials or tribulations,

    to make the world a place of woe

    pull me into tomorrow.

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