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by misscb on September 26th, 2011

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I worote this 6 years ago, I took a look thinking it would be rubbish.. turns out I still feel the same. Is it worth a rewrite? Thank you

Jagged Flow


Wanna live so much, I want to die
Scared of loving cus too scared of loosing
How can I be so good and so bad at the same time?
Hate and love, but both and always fear.
So right and so wrong, alone for too long
Generous and selfish, give because I take
Right a lot but always goes wrong
Hide a lot, but show too much too
What to do?…what to do?…

Always for a reason, comfort or truth?
Only one thing for certain.
How do you stay sane? Are you the same…
all alone, surrounded by people, which is scarier?
I don’t know, but makes me wearier

Stronger, weaker, will I ever know?
Ignorance, bliss, its night night baby,
but only wanted a kiss
Pride and shame, or just a game?
Life and death, am I insane?
Poetry in questions, is this making sense?
Emotions, soul or just an instinct?
Bad when its too good, bad’s always too bad,
Innocent or guilty? Or all in the mind?
Choices, decisions, does it all end the same..?
The inevitable, leaves me out of breath,
How can it be just five letters in death?
Should there be more, or obviously less?
Sometimes petrified , some convinced I don’t care

Conspiracy theories, waste of time,
So is this, guess that it’s a bemused goodbye.

Now that I’ve started, I cant stop,
Mind always on the go, just like a clock,
Slows, like with batteries, and eventually stops.

Controlled by one thing,
My poem, and everything alike,
Life, oh life…lets all go on strike.
Could I make a difference,
Little or not at all,
Huge to me, but still too small
Biding you farewell, good bye, adios
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Cant remember whats been written, just rolled off the tongue,
Or should I say button,
Either way I’m too young

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