by Anonymous on August 14th, 2009

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  • by SomewhereSomething on August 14th, 2009

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    I like this, it's original, different, fresh, and I love the structure and the contrasts that you use e.g. "the courage the cowardness", "the sun rain cold", "the power the lazyness". It has excellent rhythm to it as well. Just use spell check and it is quite a lovely poem!

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