by JimmyG on January 23rd, 2012

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Critique this sentence:

A skirling wind shattered rain against the car windows on every side.

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  • by Makenna_H on January 23rd, 2012

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    Beyond the streaming glass, the country scene melted into the amorphous ...

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    • Should have been 'wind', sorry. It's from a well-known, best-selling author. Actually, your sentence makes more sense.

      JimmyG

      by JimmyG on January 23rd, 2012

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